Maybe the trick is to think like a monkey? So I'm thinking about starting a new novel, since I'm still in the revision phase of From the Charred Remains. Even though I'm super excited to start book 3 in my Lucy Campion series, it could be problematic to do so. Especially if my beta readers or my editors tell me I need to rewrite the ending of book 2. That hasn't happened, but who knows? So here are the questions I'm pondering as I procrastinate, er, reflect on this new novel. Most are questions I wished I had asked myself--but of course, didn't--when I began my other novels. There's a bit of choose-your-own adventure quality to this novel-writing business, I find. 1. Do I have an idea that can be developed over 85,000 words? Do I want to spend years with this idea, draft after draft? If yes, I'll continue. If I don't, then I'll stop now. If its not compelling enough to me, than why bother? 2. Where am I going to set this story? Since I like to set my stories in the past, I've been spending some time mulling over backdrop and scenery. While I expect to research details, I find it easier to frame my novel during a time period for which I already have a basic understanding of larger political, social, economic and gender developments and trends. Paging through history texts help me envision specific aspects of the setting. However, I do of course need to find ways to make the "real" world my own. 3. Do I have a point-of-view character? Is this a character I enjoy writing about? Have I thought about what motivates, scares, excites, infuriates this character? Where does this character fit--or not fit--into society? Do I have a sense of her voice? Do I have the image of this character in my mind? Only after I get a semblance of the main character do I feel I can move on. (Here's where I cheat. I usually find a celebrity who looks something like the character I have in my mind; this helps me remember what I think this person is supposed to look like). 4. Do I have a main problem at the heart of my story? If it's a mystery, that's easy. Whodunnit? But I'm writing a different kind of story this time, so I need to think through the central problem. Until I've worked out why this is even a problem, I find I can't proceed effectively. 5. Do I have a general sense of what the other characters want in life? What kinds of quests, problems, motivations do they possess? Are the goals of my minor characters aligned with--or at odds with--those of my point-of-view character? I do figure this out along the way but I find it helpful to have some starting ideas. 6. Do I have a sense of the ending, and perhaps more importantly, a sense of the middle? I think most writers--and perhaps most readers--would agree sagging middles can really ruin a novel. So I like to think through the middle a bit before I start floundering. I've been in that morass before, and I don't like it. Jump in with a line to the other end, is how I like to think about it! (Yet, I've messed this up twice. Note to self: IN MYSTERIES, FIGURE OUT WHO THE KILLER IS BEFORE STARTING WRITING!). 7. And one last question...How will I ever string together another 85,000 words in a meaningful way? (There's a related question here: Why am I doing this crazy thing?) While I've thought about hiring 1000 monkeys to type for a 1000 years, I'm going to try the best approach I know: After figuring out the shape of my story, I will just take one scene at a time. If necessary, one paragraph at a time. And if really necessary, I will just-peck-one-word-at-a-time-until-the-first-draft-is-done. And that's it! What about you? What questions would you (do you) ask, when you sit down to create a new novel from scratch? And how many bananas will you need to feed the monkeys?
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Matt
10/10/2012 12:27:41 pm
Another insightful entry! A non-mystery, eh? Intriguing.
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bekerys
10/10/2012 08:51:31 pm
I think it would be cool for you to continue the little "Larry and the Pebble" story that you set in the far-off future. Science fiction/fantasy is a blast, 'cause you can make it all up and as long as it sounds plausible and you are consistent, who can tell you you are wrong?
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Julia, For me, I sometimes find it easier (and more fun!) to discover these back stories and motivations as I go along. Now that I'm on my fourth novel, I'm coming to realize that for me it works to remind myself of my characters little quirks and traits in a separate document; that helps me remember to emphasize them in later drafts. This way each character, no matter how fleeting his or her presence, has a purpose and some individuality.
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bekerys
10/20/2012 06:27:29 am
wait....4th novel? There's Rosamund's Gate, Charred Remains, the new one, and another new one? Which one did I miss? Yup. I have another mystery, which I wrote when A Murder at Rosamund's Gate was on submission (before I wrote From the Charred Remains). I figured I shouldn't write a sequel until the first book sold. So after I've written a few in my Lucy series, then I'll have this one to try out. Set in 1930s Chicago, is all I'll say! :-)
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bekerys
11/10/2012 03:42:09 am
So--right in the Prohibition period?
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8/8/2013 04:25:48 pm
I have read your book, 'A Murder at Rosamund's Gate' recently. I should say it is totally awesome. Appreciate the way of your writing. I am looking forward to read 'From the Charred Remains'. I think it's scheduled to be released in 2014, right?
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